I finally found my long lost money under the sofa,
So I went to the mall and got some things,
Earings, clothes, I've found what I wanted.
I Haven't missed breakfast during this week,
I felt great in the morning,
I did not fall asleep
In any class today,
My eyes finally
Fully opened
AWAKE!
Em:
ReplyDeleteVery creative. I like your label: "good mood". Nice touch!
Emily, you're lucky, I wish my week was as good as yours. I didn't get enough sleep and was tired all week. I liked how it was very clear how well your week went. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteI liked your poem a lot. I wish that I had more weeks like the one you described. I liked that you had a few different occurrences that were all great. I also thought that it was good that although each event was separate, they all seemed to flow together into one mood. Nice writing!
ReplyDeleteEmily, I really, really liked your poem. I am glad that you had a good week and hope that weeks like this one will happen to you more often. It was a well-written poem and had an overall good feeling radiating off of it. Good job.
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